Much of the content is still too general and impersonal. In the description of concrete experience, in particular, you are to present a concrete experiential scenario/case relevant to the subtopic. If you have no relevant experience to share, make it up.

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Principles of Banking
Course Description
Discuss the major functions of commercial banks and the role banks play on the economy, the community,
business, and individuals. The following subtopics are to be addressed:
Subtopic 1: Bank Safety & Soundness
Subtopic 2: Bank Regulation and Oversight
Subtopic 3: Importance of Deposit Accounts
Subtopic 4: Importance of Commercial Loans
Subtopic 5: Importance of Consumer Loans
Subtopic 6: Bank’s Role in the Local Community