1) Before looking at the document I attached, please look at this link for tips on writing a AAMC ( American Association of Medical Colleges) personal statement. https://students-residents.aamc.org/applying-medical-school/article/7-tips-write-your-essay/
2) Look at the document I attached. I gave an outline of what the personal statement is and relevant information for what the paragraphs should contain. I only gave you the relevant information you needed to write the paper. What I had written on the document is not worded correctly, doesn’t flow. Now you have the relevant information and the outline. Please make this into a good personal statement that flows well, has the info I written, and follows the tips in the AAMC link I copied and pasted earlier. Especially follow tip # 3 ( Show Don’t Tell).
3) Please make Personal Statement into 5300 characters or less.