Attached is the paper I submitted for a class. I received a 12 out of 17. They are allowing me to revise it. Below is the rubric

This paper is a compare and contrast between the Christine E Lynn CON philosophy and the philosophy of another college or organization.
Think about the words used, the implied message, the theoretical foundation identified.
Are they congruent?
How do the theories relate to leadership? Reminder this is a leadership class so use your resources! review text, assigned reading or any other scholarly source you’d like to reference.
How about change and conflict? and finally, how does this guide your practice? – Follow the rubric please.

Below is what Im missing in my paper and what needs to be edited
Which theoretical foundation identify in both philosophies? 6 out of 7 points
How do the theories relate to leadership? 3 out of 5 points
How about change and conflict? and finally, how does this guide your practice? 1.5- 3 points

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